Hi. I made another song. I actually made this quite a while ago but I finally added some finishing touches to it.
The song is rather short because I ran out of ideas again. I hope you like it.
1 Apr 9, 2013 7:48 pm
Topic: Give this song constructive criticism, please (0 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
2 Oct 29, 2012 11:18 pm
Re: I would like to have some criticism, please. (6 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
defiantsystems, I could try that out. The biggest problem I have with drums is the kick. It's made with both triangle and noise and the volume of the triangle can't be controlled. I could use a sampled drum for kick but the volume of triangle channel goes lower when a sample plays on the DPCM channel. I thought about adding some variety to the drums but I forgot what I actually wanted to add there 
And thanks a lot for the link, I shall check out the topic now.
hutsvold, I'm totally fine with people remixing my stuff and such, even if the remix is bad (I'm not saying that yours is). It makes me feel pretty complimented because it usually shows that he/she likes the song. But yeah, what you posted is a pretty interesting take on the remix. The sound of the guitar is a bit too rough for my tastes but for some reason I liked the thing around 1:08. And you don't need to remove it so don't worry ^^
Maybe I should change the license thing because I really didn't think about it much when I uploaded it. Also, do you know is it ok or against the rules to link the song my friend made into the description of the song because as I said in the description, my friend made the first melody and we both decided to compose our own songs based on it and I think some people could be interested to hear how the other song sounds like for the comparison.
3 Oct 29, 2012 8:50 pm
Topic: I would like to have some criticism, please. (6 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
Hi. I decided to upload another song I have made.
I decided to go with VRC6 this time since I needed those extra channels for the background melody and bass boost. I also wanted to go without DPCM samples this time since it lowers the volume of triangle.
I also felt like this is good enough to upload and I'm pretty surprised that I actually finished this song even though it's pretty repetitive. I do have a problem with running out of inspiration and it bugs me a lot. So I'd apprecciate some tips or anything on that subject. Or if there's a topic about here, you could give me a link. Or something.
But back to the point, here's the song http://chipmusic.org/nappi/music/chip-32
4 Jan 17, 2012 2:25 pm
Topic: I would like to have some feedback of my music (0 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
Hi!
I just uploaded a track here. It's made in Famitracker and it uses the FDS Module and DPCM drums.
As I have said in the song's description, i've been doing stuff with famitracker for couple years, (Mostly covers but also some original stuff)
and I have a bad habit not finishing songs I've made because I usually can't figure out how to continue the song.
I started to make this certain piece of music over a year ago and I have worked with it only when I've really felt like it. I made the first half of the song over a year ago and I finished the second half in October.
Anyway, I would appreciate if you could listen to my song and give some feedback about it.
http://chipmusic.org/nappi/music/111
I hope you enjoy it!