Thanks for responding guys!
Yeah, I did think the I-IV-VI-V was getting old, but I wasn't really sure where else to go.. 
Thanks a bundle for your time and for your response aviel!
I will take these into consideration for my next time around 
1 Jan 24, 2013 10:58 pm
Re: Feedback for a newbie? (3 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
2 Jan 24, 2013 2:44 am
Topic: Feedback for a newbie? (3 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
Give it a listen, I'd really like to hear what you guys have to think of it..
It's my second track with LSDJ and any tips or advice would be greatly appreciated 
3 Jan 2, 2013 4:03 am
Re: Baby's First (presentable) Track (3 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
Thank you, your comments are much appreciated!
I'll keep at it,
4 Jan 2, 2013 3:05 am
Topic: Baby's First (presentable) Track (3 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
I just recently joined the site, though I have been interested in Chip for a while, I figured that I'd try my hand at it myself..
I worked up some stuff, and this is probably the best of what I could muster..
I believe it's rather unconventional compared to other works that I've heard, and I'd like to hear some more experienced people's opinions.
http://chipmusic.org/laundromat/music/t … -of-batter
Please bear with my newbieness, and help a brotha out :]
I of course used LSDJ,
Thanks!