Wow thanks everyone nwn 
you all gave such good advice! I'm gonna try even harder now.
1 Aug 7, 2014 5:50 am
Re: Please help me improve (´;ω;`)!!!!♡ (7 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
2 Aug 2, 2014 8:10 am
Topic: Please help me improve (´;ω;`)!!!!♡ (7 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
Hello uwu I finally decided to stop lurking and make a post here..
Please critique a song ; w ; pretty please?
https://soundcloud.com/micky-martyrdom/ … stal-tokyo
I think it's one of the best things I've made on lsdj even there are a few mistake and things I would like to change.
I feel like the songs I make sound...too thin I guess? (*´。; A ; 。｀*) How do I fix that