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Anaheim, California

Hi there,

I wrote this song and enjoyed making it but felt the song itself lacked a little.  So I was wondering if someone could tell me what they like and don't like about this song.

http://trebledeathsystem.com/tracks/233

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It's really boring.

The melody sounds like crap.

Could use some drums.

Give it some more variation.

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Needs more instrumental variety, all the instruments sound pretty much the same.

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Brooklyn NY US

Arlen Bohr: TACTMASTER.

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Brooklyn NY US

/me steals "Tactmaster" for a future musical project name

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Cambridge UK

It needs more LOVE.
A lot more love.
Arlen needs more love too. :3

(and I need a catface icon)