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Funky Dream

Funky Dream

By kidThunder on Dec 16, 2010 7:34 am

I enjoyed making this song because of the bassline!

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The bass is definitely what makes it. Its lacking something although. Maybe its a tad bit too repetitive? Don't let your favorite part of the song dominate. I find the different sounds not working so well together. The funky bass with the light piano is a bit different. Consider taking those elements and adding them in different areas, or keep your lovely bass line and reworking that.

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