My Virtual Girlfriend

My Virtual Girlfriend

Hey everyone- this is my very first post on the forums here.  I wrote this for a class project; we had to make a song using the "pop song formula" and use a simple chord progression.  Just to throw out a disclaimer, this is literally the first time I've EVER written a song on my own, and also the very first time I've used LSDJ and Famitracker.  The song is about Cortana, the AI character in the Halo series.  It's supposed to be humorous so hopefully you'll think it's funny.

I just recently have gotten into chipmusic so this is all very, very new to me.  Please don't rip me apart hahah, but I am totally open for constructive criticism and I would really appreciate it.  I hope you enjoy it! Just for reference, here are the lyrics:

Verse:
Let me tell you about a girl I know,
She's blue and made of binary code (ones and zeros!).
She may only be a hologram,
But her A.I. is so smart, I don't give a damn.

Prechorus:
Real girls, they just don't do it for me,
They just can't be trusted- don't you see?
Cortana and I will save the day,
Ask me why I'm smiling, and I'll simply say:

Chorus:
I love my virtual girlfriend,
She's never playing with my heart.
I love my virtual girlfriend,
As long as I'm a gamer, we'll never be apart.

Verse:
Every time I take her on a date,
She's doesn't need to turn her controller on vibrate (bow-chicka-bow-wow!)
In multiplayer, we can't be beat,
I've got a GameShark, but she knows I'd never cheat.

Prechorus
Chorus
Bridge
Chorus x2

EDIT:  For the record, I am NOT a great singer by any means.  I actually prefer instrumental chipmusic- singing was just part of the assignment, so I had to.