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Pure Imagination

By rallyj on Oct 29, 2014 8:53 am

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Lots of happy memories from this jam! Interesting drum/bass pattern.

*Big Smile* ^_________________^ I've been wanting to cover this for awhile, ahaha. Fun. Arrangement could use a bit more flair, particularly in the lead. Maybe some more sustained volume envelopes, vibrato, volume swells, embellishment of the melody at times. Rhythm in the bassline. Could also maybe use some harmonizing to emphasize the chord progressions of the song.

I do like that you didn't got to a hyper-sugar unce beat right off the bat. You kept a chill atmosphere. I was expecting it to break into an energetic dance rhythm at some point. I appreciate that you tackled this tune. Good times. smile Smooth.

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