The Memory's We Made
By reborn.nsf on Jul 16, 2013 5:48 pm
cheers!
https://soundcloud.com/rebornnsf
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The Memory's We Made
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i didn't say the song wasn't nice, i like it. but there isn't really a prominent melody.. and look if that's the style then that is fine, but if he's asking for cc mine would be to give his songs catchy, memorable hooks. i listened to it again, and tho it was just as much fun as the first time i listened, none of the parts really 'rang a bell' if you know what i mean. it's just my cc, take or leave 
This has to be one of my all-time favorite chiptunes. Aviel, what are you talking about? The melodies and composition are very nice.
it's good, my cc would be to try and put memorable melodies into your songs so as to make them more distinguishable from the countless other happy uncey lsdj trax. i like the little tricks you add periodically, they're a nice touch.
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