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Be a Queen

Be a Queen

By subPixel on May 31, 2010 9:41 am

This is my first attempt at writing a song in famitracker.  By the end I started incorporating elements of songs I have already written.

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Awesome, thanks a lot guys. Those influences are some real motivators.  A lot to live up to. I guess to clarify, I've used Famitracker a few times so far for covers and a couple songs I had already written but this is my first go at actually composing.  Writing in a program like this always makes me paranoid that there isn't enough going on and that the song isn't long enough. I then have a hard time with letting parts breathe.

I played a few shows recently where I incorporated acoustic guitar and vocals with Famitracker. Did a Bowie , Mahavishnu Orchestra and one original tune. I'll probably be making some sort of recording of it in the next few days and I'll post it here.

FIRST attempt?
real good for 1st, i like it alot, i never really lost my interest listening to it, a bunch parts remind me of castlevania 3. which is a very good thing

sounds a bit like zzzv or sparkyboy... not a bad choice of influences at all! hard to give any actual cc, i'd say the song needs a bit more consistency, and it starts out too weak in the beginning (first 20 secs or so). generally though i hope you continue to work in this style and keep improving yourself hehe.

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