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Keponkep

By sypher1590 on Sep 2, 2017 2:28 am

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This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial (BY-NC)

Member has requested constructive criticism

Sep 4, 2017 5:24 pm

Since you requested CC:

1. Like Coconums said, you have a good amount of whimsy and bubbliness in the piece, so it sounds pretty and fantastical.
2. The piece doesn't seem to go much of anywhere. Perhaps establish a solid melody? Also, bring the pitch of your instruments down some. The WAV is a bit to far into the ear-bleeding range. Ground the instruments in a solid bass, and have your harmony and melody in the 5s or the 6s at highest.
3. Other than the high pitches, the sound design is very nice. Ground the sound design in a solid melody with some nice harmonies, and you'll have yourself a nice track :3

Hope this helps!

Sep 2, 2017 8:47 am

This is actually really neat! Really bubbly and feel-good, I like it.

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