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ChipMusic.org / Music / traxxköter's music / zyrp zyrp
Ok, this is my first tune here on chipmusic.org and also my first tune I composed since last november. done via lsdj on the gb classic, no mastering.
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The beat is just fucking awesome and the whole thing turns really heavy... daaaamn. The end's fuckin intense too. Great work!
thank you for your comment! the "out-of-tune hum" was originally ment to emphasize the bass in certain moments. in pu1 are some free space left, since there's just the bassdrum and the "jumping fx". I'll see what i can do to improve the general noise.
i really like the song progression of this one!
but i think the wav channel can be improved. instead of that strange out-of-tune hum, add some more melodical elements!
another thing you could do is, in case you have some room left on the pulse channel, try to add some phasing effects by doubling the bassline, or add some slow, quiet arp chords in the background.
and one more suggestion: cut out the beat sometimes or put some slices where your song goes completely silent, to make the rythm more lively.
and btw welcome to chipmusic.org!
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ChipMusic.org / Music / traxxköter's music / zyrp zyrp
Congrats you made my day.