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Trauma

Trauma

By xXGhostsGoBooXx on May 11, 2011 1:27 am

Listen to till the end had alot of trouble recording this song but finally managed to upload this well poorly but its decent big_smile enjoy
and this is my first attemp to make alittle dubstep

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Member has requested constructive criticism

It's a little to up-beat for dubstep.

I really like the dubstep part, it's fresh!! And how you changed from that beginning to that is pretty interetsing. The ending, I don't really like.
I'd love it if you could upload a proper recording of this. It really sounds VERY bad.

This is "cute" big_smile

Like Like! smile

Ha ha ha,  this is interesting. It's pretty rare to have dub step start out so happy sounding. The wubs you got out of the wav channel when it actually did drop were pretty neat sounding. I am torn about the yoshi sample. It's both cheesy and kind of awesome at the same time tongue. I guess my main critiques would be 1. To get a better recording (if possible of course). 2. The intro might have been just a tad long for my tastes, I'd cut it's length by about a 3rd and slowly add more glitched out sounds to the intro as it progresses and gets closer to the drop into the "wubs" section so that it transitions better. 3. The Yoshi sample is something that when used at the right time puts a smile on my face. Yet, at the same time if it is overused becomes a novelty that wears off over time. Solution? Maybe use the yoshi sound once or twice, but then mix it up with some other samples after that just to keep it interesting. To sum it up try for: A better recording *Even headphone jack to the back of the computer would be an improvement* Work on your transitions to help the song flow a little better. *Put little elements from each section into the other one to make the jump from happy to ANGRY a little more logical tongue. And vary up your samples a bit.  (Oh, and it might be the recording's fault but try to fashion a snare that has a bit more "snap" to it if that makes any sense. tongue I hope that helps! (Maybe this downtime will give you a chance to fix a few things and get more views on 8bc when you post it up there and things are up and running again. As always, if there's anything I said that was hard to understand feel free to PM me again and I'll try to make it more clear wink. Good luck! big_smile

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