Rickshaws arent necessary anymore (rough draft)
By Pastel Arsenal on May 7, 2010 12:54 am
I've been working on this for a few days now and I think it has potential, but I'm not certain on the progression of it. I've tried to make the transitions go smoothly. Not use to making songs with a progressive kinda structure (vs. verse-chorus-verse-chorus). Any suggestions?
Thanks
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