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New Orleans, Louisiana

So recently I've been putting out a few songs in LSDJ since I've finally gotten used to it since I was mainly using famitracker before. I feel like this song has been my most successful. I know I could still improve greatly as far as strong structure, but other then that I'm looking for some feedback in other areas I could improve in etc. etc.

http://soundcloud.com/shanebro/a-hero-of-few-words

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Texas

Very repetitive, but catchy.
It seems as if there are a few parts that are just thrown in there.
I like it though.

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New Orleans, Louisiana

Thanks for the response, Vic. I'm glad that you liked it.. and yeah I agree it was a bit too repetitive. I'm working to cut down the repetitiveness in my tracks now.

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New Orleans, Louisiana

Looking for some feedback on my latest track.

http://soundcloud.com/shanebro/ghostly-jam

This is the original recording. I've since touched it up a little bit, but the original is good enough.

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Armidale NSW Australia :D

Both of them are very good, they get stuck in my head smile

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.FILTHadelphia

I feel like I've heard that first song before. Did you post it somewhere else? It is a bit repetitive but that melody is catchy enough to makes up for it.

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New Orleans, Louisiana
defiantsystems wrote:

I feel like I've heard that first song before. Did you post it somewhere else? It is a bit repetitive but that melody is catchy enough to makes up for it.

I've just posted it here, and soundcloud that's it, and thanks!