I like that nasty junk at the end.
The main beat after the intro could use a bit of lead to go with that bass. Maybe some of that intro stuff. Or maybe some P-command L-command siren noises.
Are you using your wave channel at all? Why not use that for your hi-hats? Or even for your snare Edit: or Kick, or both, to free up your pulse channel to take over the bass, and allow your wave to do more stuff.
The second snare is 1 beat 'late' and there's some extra snares, but always on a beat (1/4) or half-beat (1/8)
I think that's probably the problem. It does sound a bit like a noob kid on a drumkit who can't figure out where the beat is.
I could get stoned for saying this, but try listening to Linkin Park's "Session" to get an idea of what everybody is probably thinking your broken beats should sound like.
Last edited by SketchMan3 (Jun 17, 2012 5:22 pm)