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AANABAY01

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/68828237/Untitled.mp3

one thing I immediately notice is that the kick is a little lofi. i hope you can look past that and give me even more useful feedback. thanks!

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North Dakota

it needs to be longer.

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Rochester, NY

I wanted to make this thread

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I can't hear anything, but then I'm sitting inside a grandfather clock.  Is it silent?

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Cambridge UK

A star is born.
Can I have your babiez?

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siiik remix

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Cornwall, UK

Rather nice.

The remix adds a lot of umph to the piece, I'd prefer it to the original myself.

I still feel you have a lot to learn about the craft though.

A promising effort.