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The Wild Wintery North

I have made a demo of a tune that I am supposed to make in music. I used LSDJ for the 8 bit and background. Then in GarageBand, I edited it and added some extra instruments.
This isn't entirely chiptune! There are other instruments added due to the specifications of the project.
This is just a little bit of the basics of the song, I am hoping to make it longer in a few days. I just need some advice from the "professionals" before I go ahead and complete the song. Please rant about it as much as you like, stuff that should be edited and all that. I need it, because I have to pull the whole thing together in a few days, and I don't want it to sound like crap.
Oh, and don't complain about the chip. I'm a beginner.
Here's the link:
Sum Song (Demo)

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Sounds really dark and moody, good job!
I'm not that of a professional, but I can tell you that the song is no crap, you really put some great moody melodies together!

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The Wild Wintery North

Thanks smile I was really pissed at the time of putting together the chip, so I just continued what I had.