Weazel
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Fort MItchell, KY

I have just joined the site recently and I am insanely interested in making chiptunes and hearing all of yours. I have mild knowledge of music theory and am trying to figure things out so please bare with me.

Here is the track I am looking for input on. I will probably be uploading work on here as I finish them to see if I can get any input on what to do differently or anything like that. Thanks so much for your time and I hope this track doesn't make you want to die or anything. Any input would be lovely.

I really really want to get better at this. If there is anything you can tell me to make me do better please do smile

I am not really sure where I was going with this track I sort of just kept arranging things until they sounded fine in my head.

https://soundcloud.com/weazelbright/tra … finished-i

EDIT-  I am very new here and I apologize for not reading the sticky for this forum. The constructive criticism that I am looking for is on my music theory and sound quality. I am worried that the sounds do not sound good and that I may have messed up some theory in making it. I would appreciate suggestions on either of those areas or anything that comes to mind when you listen. Again thanks.

EDIT 2- I am going to try and use this thread to post other works I come up with so that I can possibly have a continual learning experience from all of you! I would like to know whatever you have to tell me in hopes that you can help me create something amazing! Thanks  a lot!

Last edited by Weazel (Dec 24, 2012 10:01 am)

Vex
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Louisiana

I personally like it honestly. You shou get your hands on lsdj though. im curious what you would do with it. Sounds great no complaints. Dona few more ad lets see what happens..

Weazel
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Fort MItchell, KY

I made it all in Ableton Live with a bunch of VSTs I have accumulated. I really am looking for more advice on how to possibly structure songs  better. I feel like I am not very good at that at all.

Doxic
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California, United States

Posted my thoughts on your page! Also any other music you do in the future, you should just put in up in the music section of this forum as well as your soundcloud!

Weazel
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Fort MItchell, KY

Thanks a ton! I have been working on lots of stuff and I figured it will all be unfinished because I want as much input as I can to help things sound better and to learn more. I didn't want to take up space with something that is not finished or anything. Thanks for the input though and I didn't know who to ask, but should I start a new thread each time I have a new track that I want opinions on or how should I go about doing that? Again thanks for listening!

Doxic
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California, United States

I don't think that is really needed, one thing you could do is just edit the title of this thread and make it your all encompassing past, present and future works thread. Unless a mod has a better idea

Weazel
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Fort MItchell, KY

Thanks for the idea! I have been putting a lot of time into trying to figure things out and you have been very helpful thanks! I should have some new tunes from testing things here soon.

Doxic
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California, United States

Sure, no problem, we were all once new right?