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Hey guys! could i get some feedback on this song? Not meant to be taken seriously, kind of a joke or parody if you will.

https://soundcloud.com/imheadingforabom … dcore-demo

Thanks! smile

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1iNTgaaPD1k shitty music video

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Grimsby, UK

im actually digging that

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rasta_dan wrote:

im actually digging that

Thanks man! smile

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hardcore, Australia

Huge improvement on your earlier stuff.

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godinpants wrote:

Huge improvement on your earlier stuff.

Thanks! i've been working on improvement smile

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Gosford, Australia

yeah the double kicks are going off
maybe get a stronger attack going on them

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Victory Road wrote:

yeah the double kicks are going off
maybe get a stronger attack going on them

Will do

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New Albany Indiana

It was an improvement but i wouldn't put it on my iPod. If your wanting actual cc i can go full force.

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ohio gozaimasu
I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:

Not meant to be taken seriously, kind of a joke or parody if you will.

Then why, out of all songs, did you ask for CC on this?

And that video gave me cancer

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New Albany Indiana
Cooshinator wrote:
I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:

Not meant to be taken seriously, kind of a joke or parody if you will.

Then why, out of all songs, did you ask for CC on this?

And that video gave me cancer

whorish self publicity maybe

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So, what should i add to make this song better?

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ohio gozaimasu
I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:

So, what should i add to make this song better?

If it's a joke then why do you want to make it better?

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Cooshinator wrote:
I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:

So, what should i add to make this song better?

If it's a joke then why do you want to make it better?

Because man, i want to make good music but i want it to be kind of lighthearted and silly. You get me?

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New Albany Indiana

Full CC: My first impression of the song was that it was a play song, simply for fun, not meant to be taken seriously. If you want CC on songs you shouldn't say their a joke, especially on this website, the members are old and cranky and don't like "kids" like us. (Or maybe just the internet in general) I thought the beginning was power full and i felt like it could of turned into an aggressive song. I honestly wouldn't put this on my iPod VS. your other stuff which seemed more Melodic.
I am not a fan of the breakcore/chipcore stuff,so this is just my opinion. If your looking toward more aggressive music i would listen to some more unique stuff... This link here might be more effective then the stuff that they make now. http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/935/n … ssenkampf/
The release was made by my friend STereoChan. Who went on to be a very good producer and musician.

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Madison, Wisconsin, USA
Bit wish wrote:

whorish self publicity maybe

actually no need to get mad. no need