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ChipMusic.org / Forums / Constructive Criticism / New sonh (: - "Hikari" - lemme know what you think!!
i did a new song and people seem to like it 
let me know if you have any feedback on it pleeaaseee
is hurr: http://chipmusic.org/syntheticaesthetics/music/hikari
and for those who dont want to go to 8bc its also on my myspace: http://www.myspace.com/syntheticaestheticsmusic
thankss
edit: i would like some tips on how to improve plzzz
Last edited by syntheticaesthetics (Jan 27, 2010 7:09 am)
You have comments and a track posted on another site. Isn't 28 comments there enough for you? These forums are better suited for EPs and Album releases. Let's not turn this area into "Listen to my 8bc upload" forum.
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Reopened post in new forum "Constructive Criticism"
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Last edited by Trash80 (Jan 10, 2010 5:40 am)
You have comments and a track posted on another site. Isn't 28 comments there enough for you?
15 of those comments are from the OP ><
It's a pretty solid tune, the only problem I have with it is that it starts to turn stagnant. It feels as if you could have done a lot more with the second part but chose not to. Your ending was great tho, definitely shows you have some skills.
nice work 
thanks for the actual feedback
thats really helpful,
yeah i kinda felt it got a little repetitive :S
really, a link to 8bc.
- : repetitive and kinda generic chiptune sound too it.
+: it has a solid feel and flows well.