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LONDON

i did a new song and people seem to like it big_smile let me know if you have any feedback on it pleeaaseee big_smile

is hurr: http://chipmusic.org/syntheticaesthetics/music/hikari


and for those who dont want to go to 8bc its also on my myspace: http://www.myspace.com/syntheticaestheticsmusic

thankss


edit: i would like some tips on how to improve plzzz

Last edited by syntheticaesthetics (Jan 27, 2010 7:09 am)

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Los Angeles

You have comments and a track posted on another site. Isn't 28 comments there enough for you? These forums are better suited for EPs and Album releases. Let's not turn this area into "Listen to my 8bc upload" forum.


-= Edited =-
Reopened post in new forum "Constructive Criticism"

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Last edited by Trash80 (Jan 10, 2010 5:40 am)

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Edmonton, Canada

You have comments and a track posted on another site. Isn't 28 comments there enough for you?

15 of those comments are from the OP ><

It's a pretty solid tune, the only problem I have with it is that it starts to turn stagnant. It feels as if you could have done a lot more with the second part but chose not to. Your ending was great tho, definitely shows you have some skills.
nice work smile

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LONDON

thanks for the actual feedback big_smile

thats really helpful,

yeah i kinda felt it got a little repetitive :S

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Santa Barbara, California

really, a link to 8bc.

- : repetitive and kinda generic chiptune sound too it.

+:  it has a solid feel and flows well.