CatchinAshes
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Melbourne, Australia

I would like to introduce myself. I'm CatchinAshes from Melbourne, Australia.

I have been using LSDJ for about 2-3 months and this is the first time that something i have done that resembles a song.
I realize the only way I'm going to get better, other than practicing is to start getting constructive criticism from other artists.

I very much appreciate you taking your time and listening to my track and giving me feedback this really means a lot.
I understand that I have a long way to go and anything that will help me improve will be taken seriously.

https://soundcloud.com/catchinashes/life-is-changing-v3

Thanks again,
CatchinAshes

Last edited by CatchinAshes (Aug 25, 2014 9:50 am)

defPREMIUM
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why are there so many australians asking for cc!
; )

Calavera
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Melbourne, Australia

We're convicts, 'wanting to do better' is in our blood.

But yeah, I've already given CC on facebook. Will be interesting to see what other people have to offer here.

Last edited by Calavera (Aug 25, 2014 12:29 pm)

Dire Hit
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Seattle, WA
defPREMIUM wrote:

why are there so many australians asking for cc!
; )

Maybe somebody in aus quit chiptune and gave away their carts.

RJL
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Needs bass

CatchinAshes
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Melbourne, Australia
RJL wrote:

Needs bass

Thanks for feedback. will start working on the bassline.

Last edited by CatchinAshes (Aug 26, 2014 4:34 am)

sleepytimejesse
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Youngstown, OH
Calavera wrote:

We're convicts, 'wanting to do better' is in our blood.

Yeah but every AUS musician (chip/otherwise) I've met has been killing it

Just keep doin' what yer doin' guys

Calavera
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Melbourne, Australia
sleepytimejesse wrote:

Yeah but every AUS musician (chip/otherwise) I've met has been killing it

› Yet another reason we were sent to this penal colony in the first place.

Last edited by Calavera (Aug 26, 2014 6:06 am)

danimal cannon
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buffalo, NY

That dotted quarter note pattern is a tell tale sign of a table without H commands (that isn't a bad thing), just one of those things you can't unhear. A few of my early tracks have that.

Also, sorry I'm not more helpful.  Get into using your wave channel for bass.

Last edited by danimal cannon (Aug 26, 2014 6:22 am)

CatchinAshes
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Melbourne, Australia
danimal cannon wrote:

That dotted quarter note pattern is a tell tale sign of a table without H commands.

I'm gathering that you mean the dotted quarter notes in the pattern starting at about 14 seconds?

And that's all right any pointers in the right direction a muchly appreciated. smile