Hey guys!
So, this is my first post under this alias, hoorah!
I wrote music a while back under a different alias, but then life got in the way a bit and I was forced to stop. I am now able again after a year-ish hiatus and have been working on a few tunes. I have one right here, Atop the Underside (WIP Title).
I feel as though it might be overall a bit too muddy, especially near the end, but I have been going back and forth on it.
Also, is the end missing something? Or is the whole thing missing some kind of more distinct lead? I don't know, I just feel like there is an itch that the end isn't scratching, but I could just be second guessing myself on that one.
This is written in FL (please don't shame me, I recognize my wrongs), for context.
Let me know what you guys think, in general, and to what I referenced. Thanks in advance!
Cheers!
Last edited by Pharen (Jun 7, 2016 3:24 pm)
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