Je Mappelle wrote:1. experiment with more volume envelopes (particularly on the bass). it can get boring when there is no pulse in the volume.
2. to much SLIDE at parts for my personal taste.
3. i think the melody would be really nice with a direct harmony at parts.
4. maybe needs some different sections.
keep at it, was good for a first
1. Yeah, that's just my love for 80s prog-rock bass pedal basslines showing through! Usually I keep things simple in the bass department but I'll try something a bit more intricate.
2. Maybe it's a bit over the top, but as my other stuff shows, I'm a bit of a pitchbend whore!
3. Yeah, since I posted the clip I've added a bit of harmony that slides out of one of the bass parts, might do a bit more of that because it sounds super sweet.
4. Yup, this one's gonna be a prog track, I think. I've slowed it down a little and it sounds better that way.
Overall, I love the melodic sounds of famitracker, but I just can't seem to get any of my bassdrum samples to sound good. Maybe I'll use one of the square wave channels..