LOOKIN FOR FEEDBACK ON NEW TRACK!

Let me put it this way: your next darling will be prettier than this one. With that track you had a cool confluence of things going on and just because we criticized it didn't make it less good. It was one well realized idea. Now that idea is a bit muddled. This is the time as an artist where you move on to the next thing and continue to surprise yourself. After a few months you will write some awesome progression and melody and once again not be able to write a B part. You will then have an epiphany that it would go perfectly with this.