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just wondering what you guys think of this
http://chipmusic.org/layzerlobster/music/lobsterfisted
i've been using lsdj for a few weeks now and thought i'd see how i did. its a wonky track with some mad bass in parts.
what do you think so far?

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Melbtown, Lolstralia

nice wonk... but I think there is too much reverb and the kick is way too weak (try doubling it with a low noise kick or try a different technique)

the bass tones are also great its the percussion stuff that is letting this down

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Late reply, but have any advice for getting a better kick or snare?
Also what did you think of the structure? i just played around in live mode on this recording.

I'll cut down on the reverb, maybe completely. it was turned up to try get this effect i got when playing with the song earlier, where the lead ended up sounding like feedback.

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England

Very promising.

Agreed with Dot.AY. Lose the reverb and work on your percussion. I've not going to offer any advise on getting better sounds, you sound like you are are doing fine on your own. You just need to experiment and play more!