https://dl.dropbox.com/u/68828237/Untitled.mp3
one thing I immediately notice is that the kick is a little lofi. i hope you can look past that and give me even more useful feedback. thanks!
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I can't hear anything, but then I'm sitting inside a grandfather clock. Is it silent?
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Rather nice.
The remix adds a lot of umph to the piece, I'd prefer it to the original myself.
I still feel you have a lot to learn about the craft though.
A promising effort.