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Hey,

i'm just working on something. Also tried to be a little bit rockstar. Give me some feedback, i give toothpicks.

https://soundcloud.com/9-heart/9-heart- … k-rockstar

- 9-Heart

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has good build up at the beginning. seems a bit too simple for a dance song. I think I can hear a bass channel being used for percussion. (maybe it's not). I'd bring a percussion kit in for the beats, and use the bass channel to add complexity.

now, about that toothpick...

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0:16-0:56 Needs work... Nothing stands out as a lead or something to make it memorable... The end is very fucking interesting!

Also need criticism. If you've got the time, check out my thread!

- 7C7