Hey,
i'm just working on something. Also tried to be a little bit rockstar. Give me some feedback, i give toothpicks.
https://soundcloud.com/9-heart/9-heart- k-rockstar
- 9-Heart
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Hey,
i'm just working on something. Also tried to be a little bit rockstar. Give me some feedback, i give toothpicks.
https://soundcloud.com/9-heart/9-heart- k-rockstar
- 9-Heart
has good build up at the beginning. seems a bit too simple for a dance song. I think I can hear a bass channel being used for percussion. (maybe it's not). I'd bring a percussion kit in for the beats, and use the bass channel to add complexity.
now, about that toothpick...
0:16-0:56 Needs work... Nothing stands out as a lead or something to make it memorable... The end is very fucking interesting!
Also need criticism. If you've got the time, check out my thread!
- 7C7