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los angeles

http://chipmusic.org/shiroshii/music/cellovec

i'd love to know how i can improve my lsdj-ism

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The quality (aspect song writing etc) is good imo, but i think it's missing a final! as the song proceeds, it get a little repetitive.
But i like it!

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Freiburg, Germany

I like the pitch ramps on the noises in your beat. All in all I think the start is a bit rough before it gets smooth sailing, but once it gets going it's a fun ride. The beat has a nice groove. It does have a pretty flat excitement curve though which I think ties in to the feedback from Amity Level 2. There's never a longer break or a part that really shifts things up. It's still fun to listen to though, not every track needs a surprise.