I decided to take an old composition of mine and finally release it as my first single. But I felt it was too monotonous, so I added a metal(ish) segment at 1:55 (you'll know it when you hear it). It's still a work in progress.


By the way, the track pretty much ends at 3:00. I'm planning on fading it out somewhere around 3:40 so you can ignore the rest.

Solid track. Sad song though, if you were going for a feeling of hopelessness, you nailed it. I would at a higher pitched melody, maybe a bit more upbeat just to contrast how dark the rest of the song is.