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Just wondering what you guys think about my song.

http://soundcloud.com/pranda/toeys-r-tite-pce

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Ciudad de méxico, MX

interesting WAV channel.

the song is repetitive, which is not a bad thing. but the use of more variation could be interesting. more development is heard near the end, i suggest that you should try it before.

that kick is good, but i guess you can make the percussions better and stand out more, as an important part of the variation and in a more dedicated sound design.

keep it up!

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São Paulo, Brazil

make more love to the noise channel.

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Thanks for the tips Analog, do you have any suggestions on how to variate the percussion without losing rhythm? Pulselooper, what do you mean by that?

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I changed it up a bit, thoughts?
http://soundcloud.com/pranda/toeys-r-tite-dce

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Ciudad de méxico, MX

your percussion section needs more variation. for not lossing any power you should variate the second half of the 4/4 (open hi-hat and such). also, if the kick gets fuller the sound of the track will evolve a lot.