Thanks for the comments. I payed more attention to the composition of the song because it was what I gave more priority towards. But I agree with you nannode, instrumentation is an area I should improve on.

As for the bass part d3Ni$e, I'm not sure what you meant by that. Did it feel like it needed more work with the composition of them?

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Decided to listen to them, I like the school theme the most, I'm guessing it's going to be looped and that transition from end back to beginning is really good.

The battle theme felt to me like I wasn't going to fight something (it felt more like something I'd hear if I were outside or doing something playful and not something that would really pump me up for battle), but I have to ask, is it meant to feel like that? I never really played Earthbound and I haven't really heard of this game (and I don't really look up many games nowadays), but I like to feeling "Alright, let's do this" battle sequences in games, so more upbeat music that can psych me up interest me.

Overall, all the songs have their own feel to them, which is great. They do feel as if they fit with calm gameplay, but that would be about it. After a while, it felt too easy for me to listen to, so more complexity would be nice to hear (santria theme and the school them don't feel like this, I listened to the m several times because I want to study them more deeply).

I hope this helps (I don't know too much about musical theory, though I am learning, I just listen or make what sounds good to me). If you want an opinion about a more specific topic, feel free to ask.

I finished a Stickerbrush Symphony cover yesterday and I wanted to know what other people thought about it. I really like how it turned out, sounds really good to me. I'll put up a link here to soundcloud and if anyone would like the .nsf, I'll put up the link as well.

https://soundcloud.com/user-954602641/d … hony-cover

Also, if you happen to listen to any of the other ones I've made, then feel free to share your opinions for those as well.
Thanks in advance.

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I've uploaded two more song on youtube, both covers. One is 'Sherbet Land' from the N64 Mario Kart and the other is 'Koopa Beach' from Super Mario Kart.(https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCeGB_kQqxINoM8hVHNJzgkg)

Also, is it okay to show people here what I make through my youtube account or do they mostl prefer some other way, like soundcloud?


In case if anyone wants the .nsf files, here is a link to the folder with them (there is also the .nsf file for a 'Megaman 2 - Flashman's Theme' cover I made):
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/n1kh24 … .nsf_files

Here is the link for Midnight Brawl, Child's Lullaby and the Ninja Gaiden cover:

http://www.mediafire.com/?n1kh24m9dvlct

I uploaded a few songs I've made in Famitracker on my channel and I would like anybody's and everybody's opinion on them. One is a cover and the other two I've made. I am open to anything, I've never really uploaded stuff to the internet or participated in communities. I have a few other songs I've covered, but haven't uploaded them.

Either way, thanks in advance.

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCeGB_k … 8hVHNJzgkg

Hi, I'm new here, I got interested in chipmusic a whie back but it was only recently that I wanted to dedicate more time to learn how it works and how to make it. At the moment I use Famitracker and it's fine for what I want at the moment. I've been having difficulties in song making, so if anyone has any tips or previous experience, I would be very glad if you could share a few with me.

I only have two small tunes at the moment, but I'd like to make more. Here's the link:
https://soundcloud.com/user-954602641

Thanks for taking the time to read this and have a good day everyone.