Whoops, I posted in the wrong place. Ignore this.

Critique me please. Give me that extended CC yo.

https://tinyurl.com/yau59bqk

Thanks bruh.

I would like some constructive criticism for this track. I don't know what it is, as it's random sounds slapped together. It's my first track so please be aware the song may be subpar (but that's ok since I'm here to improve). I don't know what I was going for with this, as it was always hard for me to start. So here it is. So you know, I am interested in improving the track and myself, this is my first step. Feel free to be honest and straight-forward.

http://beepbox.co/#5s0kbl00e0ft9a7g0fj7 … OflmQQAg00

One day I hope to be as good as Tim Follin. I apologize if this is too vague for you (I did read the top thread), I just can't really assign a genre to this. I would also like what process/tools you use to make chiptunes though, as I do intend to branch out from this. Thank you.

Accidental double post. (Internet failed)

The name's neo. I don't know what I am. I only know that I recently wanted to make music, and therefore I have made a silly track on beep box.com and would like to get CC for what I do on there many more times in the future. I don't know music theory (YET) so please bear with me when you listen to my tracks. I appreciate honesty and straight-forwardness since I'm posting these to improve. Who knows, maybe I'll proceed to becoming a musician and practice an instrument. (I don't know which I would though) I am interested in picking up an Ableton Push 2 since it sounds cool. I don't know what I'll become in the future, but I would like to become a jack of all trades like Tim Follin is now. Nice to meet you all.