Thanks Sycamore Drive. No the song isn't staying like this, what you're listening to is just a live mix with me messing around. I went back through to change the bassline and will next be chopping it up for vocal. So the drum+bass bit will be the verse, the string bit will be chorus. I will also be comign up with a bridge section.
Once the work on the vocal starts I'll be taking that link down as my vocalist doesn't like anyone hearing works in progress.
The first version I uploaded I actually did in Q1 of 2009, so this is a nice opportunity to finish of what I started.
Thanks everyone for your feedback, this has really spurred me on. I'll be sure to give you all a listen when it's finished.