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Reteris wrote:

does anyone else think that CC (I meant constructive criticism not creative commons) is completely fucking useless? I have never wanted it

Well yeah  its all about if you enjoy the music you're making but its nice to hear what other people think smile

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http://chipmusic.org/square0ne/music/tried-and-tested

is this better?

The end sample isn't really directed at anyone as an individual.

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I no longer need any criticism anymore thank you for all of those who contributed 

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DKSTR wrote:

I think this was pretty rad if you are heading to do some avantgarde-type of shit!

If this was supposed to be catchy and melodic, then it needs some more hours:)

Thanks a lot big_smile yeah i think it needs some more time as well thanks for your good feedback smile i was going for a more experimental kind of thing

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Jay Tholen wrote:

Hmm. HMMMmmmMMmm. I don't mean to offend, but is this some kind of crazy meta joke?

PS - Nice subliminal Fallout 1 ad.

EDIT: My only constructive feedback is really to keep making songs. You'll learn through experience. That said, this is super rough; both compositionally and sonically. How are you recording this to the PC? None of the bass frequencies come through.

thankyou for that edit smile i will make up for this epic failure with more practice and work harder to make something better

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ill improve on my next song

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Screamforme99 wrote:

Why did you upload it to YouTube instead of here or soundcloud

I put it on youtube and chipmusic.org just decided to share the youtube link why?

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Screamforme99 wrote:

Dude just try harder.
If you haven't produced any music before, not only just chip, but any EDM then you need to study it a little, listen to:
Solarbear
Monotron
VCMG
Nordloef
Cheapshot
Kubbi and Luk Hash for inspiration

i never claimed that my music was good and this is my first attempt and is not going to be really really awesome i just think you could have been a bit more polite when critiquing. and im trying too improve i just cant be motivated to improve my music if people are asking if its a joke.

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Screamforme99 wrote:

Your not really getting trolled, we just can't tell if your music is a joke or not.
My CC:
First off I'm drunk.
2nd the melody (if any) sounds like shit and the only reason I can remember it is because it is annoying.
If that's what your going for great, we have another crystal castles on our hands.
3rd vocals would absolutely take this track from sounding like shit, to sounding like shit with vocals.

very constructive   -__-  this is so helpful it makes me never want to attempt anything in life.

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This album is awesome even better than the last one!

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Bit Shifter wrote:

Sure, blame the victim.

XD

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Bit Shifter wrote:
square0ne wrote:

On that note can i get some actual advice

Consider using more punctuation.

im getting trolled so hard on this post

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Vellain wrote:
square0ne wrote:

Badass????

I just really wanted to use this meme with something...

okay... im planning on making it longer aswell

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Vellain wrote:



if you want selective dissonance then you have it... suggestion = make songs longer

Badass????

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godinpants wrote:

Came here expecting the first ever song.

lol

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ultraturducken wrote:

i can violently convulse to this

XD