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pseudo-bohemian chipbrass. 2a03+vrc7 (no dpcm).
i think the transition at 3'08 is somewhat unelegant, suggestions on how to improve this part are more than welcome.
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honestly, I think I'd thicker drums, but overal, this track is a beast! its SOO well done! great job man! I say THREE OUT OF TWO THUMBS UP!
first 2 seconds you had me! sounds like Banjo Tooie ^^ stuff which is always good.
No problem, bro. Just glad I could help, I know how frustrating it can be to make suitable transitions.
oh, that's indeed a very good point. thank you very much for your help, if i release an updated version i should credit you for this!
Yes, the transition does sound a bit odd, and I think the reason is that the last chord of the B section is the same as the first chord of the A' Section. What you want to do is move away from the A minor to create the necessary tension to transition. Here's an example you could try out: || Am | G | F B7 | E7 || It's an elegant way to transition while still retaining that Gypsy-esque flavor of the piece. Besides the transition however, the piece is excellent.
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