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I think you might need a bit less repetition, or to sing/scream more to overcome some of the repetition.
Thanks a lot i'm definitely going to work on my screams more
Looking forward to hearing it dude 
@"Diamond Skies Are Enough For Me"
I'm always disappointed when I hear a good melody screamed rather than sung...But I guess that just comes with the genre. That's just my personal opinion. It's fun to imagine the implied melody, at least.
I must say, I liked the contrast between the upbeat instrumentation and the angry/angst-ridden/vindictive lyrics. Funny in a subversive.
Thanks for your feedback i'm glad you enjoyed it.
@Amity Level Two
I will work to improve my screams/shouts
As nitro2k01 said, emulators such as BGB and KiGB have wave export functions, hope that helps.
Definitely work on learning better chord progression, improving song structure, recording quality, and mixing.
Good luck!
yeah, the recording quality was a bit rough, Thanks for your feedback
This is a really great album very good work
Hey everyone just released this track tell me what you think, only constructive feedback please
lolz
Glad you fixed the problem though 
i plan on getting a SNES soon
Sorry for the bump, just letting you guys know we have a debut EP/Demo in the works
I like the idea, just needs some polishing...and more parts/changes. Kicks were a bit 'bloopy' for my taste as well. Other than that, good start. Keep at it.
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Thanks a lot, we will keep polishing the sound and try to make it better.
Thanks, over time i think we can improve and get better and better.
That's it, man.
Making a tune after tune really helps. Just listen to my first track i ever uploaded to my soundcloud and then compare it to the latest.
Time + Training makes Sucess.
Thank's for the support anyway 
With this track we just want a bit of criticism so we can figure out our style
We are going to work on getting higher pitched screams in the next song.
I don't really dig it.
Of course i love the style you are going for, but for me it dosn't did the trick.
I guess your aiming for a style kinda like this, right?
http://soundcloud.com/sternfuckingzeit/intorowYou should settle back a little and make some more before actually dropping some Tunes in the crowd. Sometimes you have to make some (or a lot) of trash before you can really definie your style and make some good tunes, that also get great feedback.
Make some more, but don't really show it. Let me quote something for you:Blockhead wrote:I will say this, it is far to early for an artist like this to be putting your music out into the ether. It is not ready. He is not ready. Keep working at it and see what happens but putting out stuff like this not gonna help anyone in the long run..He needs to plug away and refine his skills. [,,,]
Making music is a process of working from the ground up. Just cause you have recording equipment, a beat and a rhyme doesn’t mean it’s ready for prime time. I’m not saying this to be mean..but really I’m saying it to all bedroom producers out there starting out. You should be a AT LEAST a year deep before you let anyone outside you immediate circle hear your music. Trust me.That are true words, he speaks.
But who am i to judge, i just a slacker myself with shitty music.
Thanks, over time i think we can improve and get better and better.
And guturals and pigsqueals, dont forget the breakdown.
Yeah, lolz we did forget the breakdown
it needs to sound more trashy and deliberate
Thanks, we will work on that
Hello All, we are a chiptune based band from Australia, tell us what you think.
Constructive feedback only please.
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