If you haven't heard the guitar version http://chipmusic.org/i%27mheadingforabo a-fuck-you
17 Dec 10, 2012 9:59 am
Re: CC on two songs! (one with guitar!) (10 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
18 Dec 10, 2012 9:58 am
Re: CC on two songs! (one with guitar!) (10 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:Just got some guitar done for the first track! take a listen
Wow. That sounds pretty epic. Good stuffs. I think this is a good direction.
Thanks man!
19 Dec 7, 2012 10:07 pm
Re: *new track* CC on an ORIGINAL track this time (16 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
The Sky Is Black Not Blue wrote:Hey! A new Sketchman3 single..................Hey! A new Sketchman3 single
So what did you think of it?
SirPrize wrote:I just wish that bass at 0:15 would go faster and be an octave higher.
Other than that it's slamman.Huh! That's an idea. I'll have to keep that in mind for my future composings. Also, thanks! Glad you think it's slamman.
Wow, i missed this... i thought it was great! you make some really nice tunes
20 Dec 7, 2012 9:05 pm
Re: CC on two songs! (one with guitar!) (10 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
Just got some guitar done for the first track! take a listen
21 Dec 6, 2012 11:14 pm
Re: CC on two songs! (one with guitar!) (10 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
STOVE SEX
22 Dec 6, 2012 10:27 pm
Re: CC on two songs! (one with guitar!) (10 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
Xuriik wrote:Hey I guess you have improved.
Nice chords on the first one. @0:37 Bass(?) seems like just a random note thrown in completely unrelated to what the chords are doing, but I could just be missing something. Also, while it doesn't feel empty, I feel like it's kind of a waste not to use the 2nd pulse channel for something in the earlier parts of the song. Even just, like, a little pitch bend or sweep to compliment the noise snare (think Megaman). But still, it sounds cool. Nice arps.
Second tune sounds really cool. Bass is nice and bassy. Really cool.
As for CC, I feel like snares could be a bit snappier, but that's just nit picking.
I should add a sweep, ill do that ahah
and thanks, i like the arps as well!
23 Dec 6, 2012 10:25 pm
Re: CC on two songs! (one with guitar!) (10 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
On the first one, you could wait for the last note in the intro to fade out completely before the drums come in. It feels like you rushed in.
On the second one, holy shit, it's a rainbow road cover that got the notes right. You should beef it up with some chunkier sounds so it's not as boring [ Make it actual snescore? ]
Hey I guess you have improved.
1) That's what i did in the original haha, but then people complained about the piano being to long
2) Thanks man, ill mix in some different sounds with that... maybe some guitar! also, the "Snescore" was a joke hahaha
Thanks!
24 Dec 5, 2012 6:16 am
Topic: CC on two songs! (one with guitar!) (10 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
Hey guyzz, i feel i've improved greatly with these tracks.
Do you guys think the same? and could i get some advice on what to add to the first track, i'm thinking of adding guitar
https://soundcloud.com/imheadingforabom dbye-would
http://soundcloud.com/imheadingforabomb eboy-cover
Thanks and have a good holiday!
25 Nov 24, 2012 10:54 pm
Re: This blog posts mediafire downloads of chip releases (42 replies, posted in General Discussion)
it doesnt look like a lot of work goes into the blog to me. im not trying to be a dick or anything or slag that its for the artists, but then again, one could argue that if a lot of work were going into it that maybe there wouldnt be full releases from artists who are charging for their work there.
Dude, the blog is hard to run. HEAPS of the guys time goes into posting.
26 Nov 24, 2012 10:28 pm
Re: This blog posts mediafire downloads of chip releases (42 replies, posted in General Discussion)
I help run this blog, although i'm not responsible for the download links or the posts. Just the fb page, the owner of the blog has seen this topic....
so, address your problems to me
27 Nov 9, 2012 7:06 am
Re: Square One-Bubblegum Rainbow GBA Attack! (2 replies, posted in Releases)
Cool sounds, bro.
I'm not a fan of profanatic samples, but I'd be lying if I said I thought they were used poorly.
Thanks, the samples are just in there to make it clear that the EP isn't serious just trying to be entertaining ahha
28 Nov 9, 2012 3:04 am
Topic: Square One-Bubblegum Rainbow GBA Attack! (2 replies, posted in Releases)
29 Nov 7, 2012 6:57 am
Re: know any chip hiphop artists? (64 replies, posted in General Discussion)
http://soundcloud.com/fauxhound/love-se remaster-1 I know you said instrumental..... but this is just awesome
30 Nov 2, 2012 8:41 am
Re: Need some CC for a compilation track (5 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
I hear some Pokemon influence.
It's funny. The endings of your songs are always the part I like, where it starts to get interesting and different.
There are some cool moments. I do see a bit of growth. I notice you altered your lead to match your bass note at times. Form and coherency seems to have improved a bit.
As far as CC goes:
I think your kicks could sustain a bit longer to add a bit of bass to the mix.
Try using some longer sustaining notes in your lead sometimes, maybe. Maybe a bit of melody would be nice.
Maybe use the other PULSE channel to harmonize with the lead or echo the lead during times where the bass is not present.
Try using a wider PULSE width like 25% and 50% for bass sometimes.Personal appeal: Make a song that builds off the ending as a "Part 2" or something. It seems like you abort your tunes before they begin to mature. that's my humble opinion.
Ya know, same old same old.
Funny you mention the aborting, there was a bit after that ending where it goes into a breakdown and then into a techno section but i ditched that
31 Nov 2, 2012 7:45 am
Re: Need some CC for a compilation track (5 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
you want CC on something that's already out? kinda defeats the point.
Just to see of i've improved
32 Nov 2, 2012 12:00 am
Re: Need some CC for a compilation track (5 replies, posted in Constructive Criticism)
bump, double posted i think it killed the thread