Solarbear wrote:

good sir.

Not a sir, btw wink

Yeah, technically I'm still a noob. But I've been writing music for the past 5 years and I'm qualified enough to have and voice an opinion. Thanks for the explanation, Nick!

You doubt what, exactly?

Experience, and I was told that by someone a long time ago, don't quite remember who. Obviously the exact number is different for everyone, but that's a fair rule of thumb I believe.

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This is actually mad chill and awesome. I like it dude! What did you do it in?

Is there a difference?

And thank you so much wink I'm happy to be running it, hopefully one day we'll get this guys music on that blog haha smile

The Sky Is Black Not Blue wrote:
BR1GHT PR1MATE wrote:

this thread is hilarious

Thank You for that unnecessary contribution, please never visit a thread of mine again.

WOAH HEY NOW

Don't do that

Frostbyte wrote:

Have you read ONE positive thing anyone has said to you on this thread? Seriously, what the hell. I'm normally not confrontational at all but come on, there are things that have been said to you that are so damn helpful that you will never even understand it until you are comfortable making music. Take advantage of the advice, not offense. Nobody even made any digs at you until you threw up the defensiveness front. Just like, read what's being said to you? I don't know. You're not going to find a community that's any different haha, it's just a matter of how to effectively join a community online. If you act like a noob, you're seen as a noob. I have had my share of noob conflicts on this forum: it's actually my fault that the administration made the rule about descriptive thread titles...haha. It took me a while to gain the respect I wanted in this community, not because it's anti noob, but because it's full of adult people with real life experience. You don't just get respect, you earn it with good music skills, offering help in the community, and being a good, reasonable person. I have made all the noob mistakes, like posting my first songs for criticism and expecting to be great, releasing an ep that I thought sounded good after spending about 3 weeks writing (it's only meh, and only for sentimental reasons now).

I can only encourage you not to leave or give up, but honestly, making music takes so much dedication and work. I've been lucky to have been born around music, and to have my father as a genius composer. I've studied trumpet for 10 years now, and I still bbarely consider myself good. But don't think about that. Think about it a step at a time, building skills and learning as much as you can whenever you can.

So quit your whining, and act like a man wink this is real life, on the Internet, with adult people.

Peace.

Wow, I'm actually quite proud of this post haha, I feel so matured. And slightly cynical.

Would just like to remind newcomers that your "My First LSDJ" songs can be posted in here and you're probably not going to get yelled at wink.

Just helping to cut down on those disappointing threads.

Russellian wrote:
Kedromelon wrote:

this! man, I was hoping someone would say this.
you can learn and figure out literally everything you need to get the ball rolling WITHOUT saying a single word to any of us chipjerks

I mean, that's what I'm doing right now. Just sayin'...

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It actually looks pretty pro on my iPhone haha

The Sky Is Black Not Blue wrote:
Frostbyte wrote:

I haven't listened to the song, but I can tell what it sounds like from my fellow musicians reactions and the first song you posted. You should definitely lower the volume of the vocals and try to make them more clean and fit into themix better. If they're the right volume with minimal effects processing it can sound good. The track is just loud right now, and thats no good unless it's clear what everything is.

Okay so the main reaction is less effects and cleaner vocals?

I definitely recommend you listen to the song it sounds very different to the first song.

Just listened to bits and pieces of it, and yeah it's pretty much what I expected. Not really any spot that catches listener attention. There's no wav, no bass, no kick, I mean, those are all really essential to keeping attention of the listener. The vocals were actually pretty hard to listen to because of the pure screechiness of it, but it was cleaner than I expected. Better mixed than I thought.

Change the font from Times New Roman pl0x wink

And it loads slow as balls. Just some things to keep in mind smile Otherwise, not bad!

WHAT THIS IS SO GOOD.

Nevar stop making music.

Have you read ONE positive thing anyone has said to you on this thread? Seriously, what the hell. I'm normally not confrontational at all but come on, there are things that have been said to you that are so damn helpful that you will never even understand it until you are comfortable making music. Take advantage of the advice, not offense. Nobody even made any digs at you until you threw up the defensiveness front. Just like, read what's being said to you? I don't know. You're not going to find a community that's any different haha, it's just a matter of how to effectively join a community online. If you act like a noob, you're seen as a noob. I have had my share of noob conflicts on this forum: it's actually my fault that the administration made the rule about descriptive thread titles...haha. It took me a while to gain the respect I wanted in this community, not because it's anti noob, but because it's full of adult people with real life experience. You don't just get respect, you earn it with good music skills, offering help in the community, and being a good, reasonable person. I have made all the noob mistakes, like posting my first songs for criticism and expecting to be great, releasing an ep that I thought sounded good after spending about 3 weeks writing (it's only meh, and only for sentimental reasons now).

I can only encourage you not to leave or give up, but honestly, making music takes so much dedication and work. I've been lucky to have been born around music, and to have my father as a genius composer. I've studied trumpet for 10 years now, and I still bbarely consider myself good. But don't think about that. Think about it a step at a time, building skills and learning as much as you can whenever you can.

So quit your whining, and act like a man wink this is real life, on the Internet, with adult people.

Peace.

I haven't listened to the song, but I can tell what it sounds like from my fellow musicians reactions and the first song you posted. You should definitely lower the volume of the vocals and try to make them more clean and fit into themix better. If they're the right volume with minimal effects processing it can sound good. The track is just loud right now, and thats no good unless it's clear what everything is.