I like that nasty junk at the end.
The main beat after the intro could use a bit of lead to go with that bass. Maybe some of that intro stuff. Or maybe some P-command L-command siren noises.
Are you using your wave channel at all? Why not use that for your hi-hats? Or even for your snare Edit: or Kick, or both, to free up your pulse channel to take over the bass, and allow your wave to do more stuff.
The second snare is 1 beat 'late' and there's some extra snares, but always on a beat (1/4) or half-beat (1/8)
I think that's probably the problem. It does sound a bit like a noob kid on a drumkit who can't figure out where the beat is.
I could get stoned for saying this, but try listening to Linkin Park's "Session" to get an idea of what everybody is probably thinking your broken beats should sound like.